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Old 04-01-2013, 11:18 PM   #1
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New video

I would like to know what you guys think about the video.
And if you have any tips for future videos.
This is my first try at a chase scene.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBRY0UAToFY
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Old 04-01-2013, 11:43 PM   #2
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I watched :28 seconds. The first shot from tripod to handheld is jarring and doesn't work. The other clips could be tightened up. Insert close-up cutaways to smoothen the transitions. Practice will get you there.

Good luck.
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