Originally Posted by Flipthis22
I just read your 22 pages. I really like it. I couldn't stop reading it. I do have a few suggestions for improvement. Story wise I can't give suggestions because I don't know where this is all heading towards.
Also, I don't know if you'd consider a collaboration. I would love to help write it.
If not, it's okay. I can still give you the feedback of what I thought.
Hey thanks for taking the time to read it. Respectfully, I'm going to have to decline on collaborating as I'm working with my brother on this project, but I'd love to check out some of your work and if our styles align, I might be interested in doing some collaboration.
Regarding your suggestions, please by all means let me know what your thoughts are. I'd love to hear them.