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watch Super Smash 64 - A Gamer's Rampage

The concept is decent, but the execution is lacking. You could build the sense of escalating frustration better (and keep the overall film more interesting) if you used more angles and did some more editing - reaction shots of the player's face, close-ups of the game, etc.
 
Thanks man for the feedback.

For this particular short, the feel of it was supposed to be more like a regular video, more natural, than an actual short film. I purposely didn't add any extra angles, especially of the actor's faces because I feel that would've conveyed an amount of emotion that would have been too over the top for this. "Less is more" kind of thing.

An experiment though, for sure. We'll see what the majority of the feedback says over the next few weeks :)

ItDonnedOnMe said:
The concept is decent, but the execution is lacking. You could build the sense of escalating frustration better (and keep the overall film more interesting) if you used more angles and did some more editing - reaction shots of the player's face, close-ups of the game, etc.
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