Hi, just finished a re-write in the past couple of days and was hoping for some feedback.
LOGLINE: "After beginning a relationship with woman, James a lazy robot becomes increasingly uncertain about their compatibility, and the nature of his existence."
Here's a link to the script: https://www.dropbox.com/s/4ny8p41ozhc2h1q/High Tech - Dopbox Copy.pdf?dl=0
If you hate the logline and that's stopping you reading the script, then that's still helpful feedback. Thanks!
LOGLINE: "After beginning a relationship with woman, James a lazy robot becomes increasingly uncertain about their compatibility, and the nature of his existence."
Here's a link to the script: https://www.dropbox.com/s/4ny8p41ozhc2h1q/High Tech - Dopbox Copy.pdf?dl=0
If you hate the logline and that's stopping you reading the script, then that's still helpful feedback. Thanks!
