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Hi All,

What are the opinions for my animation? the music is written by me as well. I tried to interact image's with the music.

Hard opinions are welcome, soft one's as well

http://youtu.be/4-MEGuo9X2Y

Greetings,

Robert

Hi There.

I love a good sci fi video me. I definitely liked the music, and I like a conceptual sci fi vid.

However, where the parallax between cockpit and outerspace was nice, I really think you should look at your typography. The fonts you chose were so basic and not that interesting. I think what you needed to do was really go away and look at great examples, here google is your friend and trawl the internet for subtitles that are interestingly done.

A nice style to try would have been the text distorting in as if the interference from being millions of miles away would affect it. Because it would

Also, i think the journeys between systems (if that is indeed what happened) would have benefited from some hyperspeed type effects.

Well, those are my opinions. The main one is look at the text. That will really help it.

Cheers

You got some good point's there Paul, thank you. I will definitely look at more challenging texts. Thanks!
Robert

Agreed, the typography could be more exciting. Fonts are something I struggle with myself. A tutorial like this could give you the "distortion" effect Paul may have been suggesting:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EYkqC9uI8Nc

Keep up the good work!

I might just do a remake Thanks Morrison!

I made this a while back. It was part of a larger art project, but it was to have subtitles. So I decided to jazz them up a bit. pretty simple effect too.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nmE-8FLAChM

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nmE-8FLAChM