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Old 10-09-2011, 10:24 PM   #1
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"EATING OUT" storyboard

What do you think of this storyboard? Is it clear enough about whats going on?

I just "recorded" dialog with me and my girlfriend, for reference sake. None of this, of course is a final product, but would it work as a storyboard?

Its my first opening scene to the short film

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FHIp2ljf2bE
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Looks good to me. What software did you use to make it?
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Old 10-10-2011, 06:24 AM   #4
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Yes, it looks clear.
It also looks like it takes much more time to render than to just scratch out a comparable pencil sketch.

FWIW, I thought you said in some other thread you have a Russian accent?
There might be a taint of something, but... eh... Sounds fine to me.
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Ooh yea, trust me, the accent is there. Maybe I was more aware to speak slowly and round my "r"'s

I did do some pencil sketches, but wanted to see how this software works.
Timewise it wasn't that bad. Took about 15 mins to set up a dummy, car and a house, but after that it was a piece of cake.
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Old 10-10-2011, 04:01 PM   #6
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i will finish the storyboard tomorrow.

the rendering actually took about 10 seconds.. but i already see how much of improvement it will have on the actual production. cant wait to start filming it!
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