watch Rough Cut for C&C

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6h_vUszK65Y

Here is a rough cut that I'm looking for some feedback on. The intro does not have sound yet and the titles are temp. This is pre-coloring and we're looking to keep the cool tones and will most likely crush the blacks. Any C&C is appreciated.

Bump with newest cut
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BsWyTZMhOog

Nice twist at the end. It's not my style of video or music, and to be honest I didn't enjoy it, but I think you did a good job fulfilling your vision. The transition from the calm, melancholy opening image to the rest of the video was jarring (as I think it was intended to be). There was a nice balance between quick cuts and a few longer takes, and I liked most of the coloring. I did have a hard time understanding the words in places, and it seems kind of lame to burn a $1 bill (I went back afterwards to check the number).