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Old 12-28-2018, 06:52 AM   #1
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Masterpieces of a city: Rome

Hello lovely people, I travelled to Rome for a few days and explored the breathtaking city with it's stunning buildings and people. Check out my video to get a glimpse of Rome and how wonderful the city is. Hope you enjoy it.

If you have constructive critism, please let me know

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I really like your video. Nice editing and flow! Rome is the most beautiful city I've ever seen. Can't wait to go back.


On a different note:
I think this is the more appropriate forum? http://www.indietalk.com/forumdisplay.php?f=56

I think here is more for actual filmmaking questions as opposed to showcasing your work and asking for constructive criticism. (I think.)
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Thank you for your feedback! I do really apologize if I posted in the wrong forum!
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I think you need to speed up the foodage and cuts or take a different song for this edit especially in the beginning of your movie. What you do at 0.33 works and feels richt.. After 0.50 I think you're editing ritm is much better. Good shots...

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Old 01-03-2019, 01:17 PM   #5
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Thanks Feutus Lapdance, I was experimenting with slow motion and yeah I think I used it too much. Anyway thanks for the feedback. Much appreciated!
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