Hi everybody!
I have recently finished working on a script, so I'm thinking about starting new projects.
What about the following logline? Do you think it works?
I'm not very skilled in writing loglines. Hence, your help will be deeply appreciated
LOGLINE (SHORT FILM)
In the frenetic City of Turin, an apathetic mail carrier, a mid-aged woman who's afraid to talk to strangers, loses her dog, the only mate in her lonely life, but thanks to the help of an energetic and carefree girl, she finds the dog and rediscovers the poetry of fellowship in the little things.
Thanks!
I have recently finished working on a script, so I'm thinking about starting new projects.
What about the following logline? Do you think it works?
I'm not very skilled in writing loglines. Hence, your help will be deeply appreciated
LOGLINE (SHORT FILM)
In the frenetic City of Turin, an apathetic mail carrier, a mid-aged woman who's afraid to talk to strangers, loses her dog, the only mate in her lonely life, but thanks to the help of an energetic and carefree girl, she finds the dog and rediscovers the poetry of fellowship in the little things.
Thanks!