Hi all,
It's my first time using this forum and I wanted to use it so I can seek some advice with a logline for a film that I'm writing.
I don't want to tell you too much about the film, what I'd prefer is for you guys to imagine that you're some bigwig movie exec, looking for a new project to greenlight and these two loglines come across your desk. Which one do you think is better?
The title of the film is: Creatures Seeking Approval
Logline 1:
A modern gay couple explores an open relationship. Heteronormativity is just so old-fashioned.
Logline 2:
Samuel and Bryan are a modern gay couple. They're depressed, they're self-loathing and they're about to explore an open relationship.
I'd love to hear your opinions, which of these do you think is better? Or are they both terrible?
It's my first time using this forum and I wanted to use it so I can seek some advice with a logline for a film that I'm writing.
I don't want to tell you too much about the film, what I'd prefer is for you guys to imagine that you're some bigwig movie exec, looking for a new project to greenlight and these two loglines come across your desk. Which one do you think is better?
The title of the film is: Creatures Seeking Approval
Logline 1:
A modern gay couple explores an open relationship. Heteronormativity is just so old-fashioned.
Logline 2:
Samuel and Bryan are a modern gay couple. They're depressed, they're self-loathing and they're about to explore an open relationship.
I'd love to hear your opinions, which of these do you think is better? Or are they both terrible?