Hello,
I am an aspiring filmmaker currently living in Iran. I hope one day I can break into Hollywood industry. I have written a feature length screenplay. Any professional who has the time to read the first 10-15 pages and give me their ideas are welcome.
Two problems however:
1. I don't write generic dialogue for my important characters, so I intentionally use peculiar words to express an idea sometimes.( That's just my personal creative preference), but since English is not my mother's tongue, many critiques say that this unique voice is due to my weak grasp of English and not because of my non-generic dialogue. but since the critiques who have read the script overgeneralize some issues and do not give me detailed examples, I can't decide if they are right or wrong. So if you read the script and believe that my script doesn't represent the way English language is spoken, I'll need you to give me detailed examples of the parts that read or feel wrong.
2. You can be as brutal as you want to be. but if you point out certain issues, please give me examples so I'd know what I did wrong.
Send me your email address I'll send a PDF for you.
Thank you in advance.
I am an aspiring filmmaker currently living in Iran. I hope one day I can break into Hollywood industry. I have written a feature length screenplay. Any professional who has the time to read the first 10-15 pages and give me their ideas are welcome.
Two problems however:
1. I don't write generic dialogue for my important characters, so I intentionally use peculiar words to express an idea sometimes.( That's just my personal creative preference), but since English is not my mother's tongue, many critiques say that this unique voice is due to my weak grasp of English and not because of my non-generic dialogue. but since the critiques who have read the script overgeneralize some issues and do not give me detailed examples, I can't decide if they are right or wrong. So if you read the script and believe that my script doesn't represent the way English language is spoken, I'll need you to give me detailed examples of the parts that read or feel wrong.
2. You can be as brutal as you want to be. but if you point out certain issues, please give me examples so I'd know what I did wrong.
Send me your email address I'll send a PDF for you.
Thank you in advance.
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