please help me out!!!

Thread starter believersneverdie48
Start date Aug 1, 2011

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believersneverdie48

Aug 1, 2011

#1

could you give me some feedback on the dialogue i wrote for this short film?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6O9IUaaO2iM

thanks in advance

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Murdock

Aug 1, 2011

#2

Hello and Welcome

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wheatgrinder

Aug 3, 2011

#3

its bad

your welcome.

Reply if you want some details.

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