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Old 01-10-2019, 03:02 PM   #1
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Windows Media Player My first project. "life station"

Hi!
I would like to share my first project.
It's not only about videos, but these videos are one of the main things in the project.
So..Maybe some of you will like it, but some of you may also express their opinion on it,
and perhaps this will give me food for thought.
If it is constructive criticism, well great,
but even if it's not, you can just write what you think about it,
because it's not a usual one and it can be hard to judge.

Here is the whole project with art works and a dialog which help to understand videos










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Old 01-10-2019, 05:27 PM   #3
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This is some very creative and intriguing work. I liked what I saw. I have no critique.
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Great job! I loved the train and the cross scenes. Although you didn't use any words I could still sense some sort of a story and some vivid emotions was portrayed through your shots in my opinion. Fantastic scores. In complete sync with your shots. Overall i think u did a fantastic job.

I'm afraid I can't critique these for u since I'm not at all familiar with negative shots. The only suggestion I can give u is if u could come up with a story for a short film and put these in your film , you are gonna get a great result. With a descent story u r gonna have a chance in festivals I think.
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Old 01-11-2019, 02:27 AM   #5
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Great job! I loved the train and the cross scenes. Although you didn't use any words I could still sense some sort of a story and some vivid emotions was portrayed through your shots in my opinion. Fantastic scores. In complete sync with your shots. Overall i think u did a fantastic job.

I'm afraid I can't critique these for u since I'm not at all familiar with negative shots. The only suggestion I can give u is if u could come up with a story for a short film and put these in your film , you are gonna get a great result. With a descent story u r gonna have a chance in festivals I think.
Man, thanks for these words! I've thought about short film, but I also know how much it takes to make a good one and at first I really have to improve myself. Thanks again, u made my day!
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