I liked it! Didn't seem rushed to me either.
I'm by far an expert in cinematography, but I think your short is shot very nicely. The ligthing gives the short a dark ambiance which I think works out very well and compliments the story a lot.
I must admit I'm not a huge fan of the voice over. I think that your short might have had a bigger (emotional) impact without it.
Again, this is just my personal opinion. All in all I think you made a great short and I will definitely check out your future short films.
Nice job!