Hey everyone!
I wrote a screenplay for a project I plan on submitting to festivals. If it's not a big hassle, could I get some notes? Or your thoughts on it?
https://www.dropbox.com/s/cvluyzfozi6l0bb/The%20Influencer%20V4.docx?dl=0
Premise:
"The Influencer" is a comedy about a wannabe social media mogul who, when faced with the reality that he's not making enough money to pursue his dreams, is forced to get an office job. With his zany personality, can he adjust to the life of a normal person?
My main question to the audience is "does this script make sense?" I'm not sure whether a lot of ideas in the script need to be explained more thoroughly or not.
Any advice is appreciated. Thanks!
I wrote a screenplay for a project I plan on submitting to festivals. If it's not a big hassle, could I get some notes? Or your thoughts on it?
https://www.dropbox.com/s/cvluyzfozi6l0bb/The%20Influencer%20V4.docx?dl=0
Premise:
"The Influencer" is a comedy about a wannabe social media mogul who, when faced with the reality that he's not making enough money to pursue his dreams, is forced to get an office job. With his zany personality, can he adjust to the life of a normal person?
My main question to the audience is "does this script make sense?" I'm not sure whether a lot of ideas in the script need to be explained more thoroughly or not.
Any advice is appreciated. Thanks!
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