This is only the second screenplay I've attempted to write. The first one is even longer. Just looking for osme advice on how my format looks, how the characters sound and if it comes out clearly. Actually, any and all advice. I've been trying to write it in a way icould film it myself but I actually don't want to film it myself. I really wish someone else would film it. That job seems daunting and with Kids & a job it's just intimdating. However, I really want this script to be the best it can be for my level of experience, which is next to zero. basically, I want to know if this looks and feels like a real screenplay or ateast a real script in it's infancy. Its a little over 40 pages.
If you make it through the whole thing awesome, if you don't I get it. Any feedback is super appreciated. I love reading other peoples stuff too it's mutually helpful. I learn something and I can give notes potentially helping someone else. Thanks.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B9wpz6r-vXucdmZYdUZibE5rd0RwLWlQbGdjQ2dBT2diS18w/view?usp=sharing
If you make it through the whole thing awesome, if you don't I get it. Any feedback is super appreciated. I love reading other peoples stuff too it's mutually helpful. I learn something and I can give notes potentially helping someone else. Thanks.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B9wpz6r-vXucdmZYdUZibE5rd0RwLWlQbGdjQ2dBT2diS18w/view?usp=sharing