i agree, i think the acting and production was all well put together, i loved the followers line delivery. would love to hear what you shot on, too!
for me, though, i didn't think the story was particularly interesting. was it supposed to be a commentary on internet tracking? once you sign up for facebook, twitter, et. anyone can know anything about you, OR "follow you" forever?... eh. i mean, fucking awesome if it were a PSA against facebook, but as a short... eh.
other minor things:
was he wearing a suit? just hanging out at home, surfing the web, eating dinner...wearing a suit? attention to details in set and props and wardrobe is just a big thing for me. personally, i shed my work clothes faster than you can say "work clothes" as soon as i get home haha
pacing could have moved a bit faster, i didn't feel like the intensity, nervousness was built in a way that quite worked, and i think moving it a bit faster may have helped. maybe. that's kinda a tough call, but something was just a bit off about the pacing. definitely not a big thing tho.
loved that penultimate shot!!!!! definitely didn't need the last one where the (1) notification comes up, that beat a dead horse and killed the really cool feeling i would have been left with had you used the wide as the very ending
but really well put together, keep up the great work!
