The production value was very good, everything from image to sound was done very well. The story itself was amusing, as mentioned before, the pace could have been a little quicker IMHO.
My only real complaint was the dialogue, or lack there of. Why did the soldier with the rifle sound like Daffy Duck lol? It was a little distracting and would have worked better with words, but that's the only negative things I found.
Otherwise, great job and good luck on the next project!