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watch My first short film "Stained"

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z3rik23

Very happy to be sharing my first completed short film! We started writing the story about 6 months ago, shot it in 3 days and spent about a month editing! Very excited to hear some feedback anyone might have, thank you!


"The depths of insanity are explored by a man who confronts an irremovable stain."
https://vimeo.com/194959619
 
None I guess. You could have a cool scene where you're shopping at a office depot.

In all seriousness, I thought you did a good job.
 
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What an amazing concept for a short. Loved it. Nice work.

My only critique would be some weird editing choices that were a little jarring.
 
Nice, could be a very good information type of advertising, like "Don't loose your life for perfection, doesn't exist" or something similar. I liked it! Good job.
 
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