Hey, hi.
Since I'm tring to build my story around the actors I have (I found it unproductive the other way around), I'm trying to write something where a little girl would be the main char.
I'm looking for a 10 minute format, approximately.
I had an idea but I'm not convinced (I never am).
It would be about a little girl telling in Voice Over (I have a fiend who has a studio) her story. She would tell how she was "bred" to be a perfect wife. She's been taught how to take care of the household and how to please men. As she shows signs of maturity very early, a husband is found for her (actress is 12) by her mother, eager to collect the bride price. She follows whatever her parents want her to do because she was taught respect and obedience and she really can't see why not after all.
The day she visits her husband to be, she wanders in his house and finds a hidden room. Inside, she finds tortured Barbie dolls, with headless bodies, scary makeups, torn hair and evidence of violence. She realizes the monster he is and decides to do the world a favor. She goes home, and sets up a plan for shooting him. After murdering him, she realizes that if was kindda fun, and that killing such monsters was her calling.
That's how far I went with it before asking myself if it wasn't too dark for a little girl. I'm really having a lot of trouble seeing the world through a girl's eyes.
I wish I could show you the actual text but it's in formal French and I'll have a lot of trouble translating it.
If you know a few good movies about little girls as narrators, feel free to drop the names !
And if there's a theme you think is appropriate and interesting for a little girl, please do tell !
Since I'm tring to build my story around the actors I have (I found it unproductive the other way around), I'm trying to write something where a little girl would be the main char.
I'm looking for a 10 minute format, approximately.
I had an idea but I'm not convinced (I never am).
It would be about a little girl telling in Voice Over (I have a fiend who has a studio) her story. She would tell how she was "bred" to be a perfect wife. She's been taught how to take care of the household and how to please men. As she shows signs of maturity very early, a husband is found for her (actress is 12) by her mother, eager to collect the bride price. She follows whatever her parents want her to do because she was taught respect and obedience and she really can't see why not after all.
The day she visits her husband to be, she wanders in his house and finds a hidden room. Inside, she finds tortured Barbie dolls, with headless bodies, scary makeups, torn hair and evidence of violence. She realizes the monster he is and decides to do the world a favor. She goes home, and sets up a plan for shooting him. After murdering him, she realizes that if was kindda fun, and that killing such monsters was her calling.
That's how far I went with it before asking myself if it wasn't too dark for a little girl. I'm really having a lot of trouble seeing the world through a girl's eyes.
I wish I could show you the actual text but it's in formal French and I'll have a lot of trouble translating it.
If you know a few good movies about little girls as narrators, feel free to drop the names !
And if there's a theme you think is appropriate and interesting for a little girl, please do tell !