watch My First Music Video

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Survivalshortshd

• Apr 24, 2015

• #1

Hi everyone,

For college (16-18 year olds in the UK) we were asked to make a Music Video with non copyrighted music. Me and a couple of friends made a video for a band called Fassine. It's the first Music Video I've ever done, and I am completely open to criticism, however harsh!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kOAx4sj0rao

Thanks,

Christian Radclyffe

 

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gorillaonabike

• Apr 24, 2015

• #2

Congrats on completing this.

Great start: Will steal the initial idea but needed a real story to engage. Was a bit aimless.

Needs stronger cinematography.

Decent first effort and look forward to seeing where you go with this.

 

film_autre

• Apr 24, 2015

• #3

liked the editing alot, however I feel the pig mask lead to a massive downfall in hype, I was expecting some kind of dark gritty feeling but was lead with endless walking and pointless direction, in the end its a lady in a pigs mask who just walks..

this is my non-harsh opinion.