Murdock Jun 29, 2015 #3 I can't suspend disbelief when young people play old people. The story line was a bit sketchy to me, or I didn't catch something. IDK.
I can't suspend disbelief when young people play old people. The story line was a bit sketchy to me, or I didn't catch something. IDK.
A aubrey Jul 6, 2015 #4 Murdock said: I can't suspend disbelief when young people play old people. The story line was a bit sketchy to me, or I didn't catch something. IDK. Click to expand... I get these two a lot! Definitely need to improve how I lay out a plot. Thank you for taking the time to watch the film.
Murdock said: I can't suspend disbelief when young people play old people. The story line was a bit sketchy to me, or I didn't catch something. IDK. Click to expand... I get these two a lot! Definitely need to improve how I lay out a plot. Thank you for taking the time to watch the film.
A aubrey Nov 30, 2015 #5 Last audacious bid to get feedback: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VTYppUBDG2k Last edited: Nov 30, 2015