Originally Posted by shortboy
Comments and critiques are always welcome.
First, a critique. When the thugs are putting their gear on the table, the delivery of dialogue could flow better. By that, I mean that the timing could be tighter, if you had some more closeups to cut to, instead of holding the wide shot.
Now, for a couple of comments: I really like this! The fight choreography is amazing. The tongue in cheek tone really works. Music was cool.
Your actress did a good job, especially the fighting. I'm guessing she is a martial artist, as are probably some of the guys, just by the punishment they were taking - falling down the stairs, etc. They did a good job of selling some of her moves, such as the spin around the head, flips, and hits. Can you fill us in on this info?
What did you shoot and edit with?