Originally Posted by Khappa MJ
Hope it can be interesting for you even without voices, please let us know that
... also on YouTube !
It looked to me like you made a mistake in the mix. I thought
the dialogue track was missing. So it wasn't interesting to me.
I didn't get a sense of the story - it was just random shots with
Your opening titles: "dark Evil is raising"; raising is incorrect.
While raise and rise both mean "up", to raise needs an object.
Evil is not an object. What you mean is evil is rising. And even
then there are better words to convey that message.
The animation is terrific. You should showcase a much better
demo trailer. There is a reason that producers (and directors)
do not make their own trailers; we get too close to the hard work
we did and want to show it. You need to take a step back and show
us what your movie is about, what will make us want to watch it
rather than showing all you hard work in an unfinished stage.
Put together 90 seconds and don't show talking without the dialogue
tracks. Three minutes is way too much. I was bored after 60 seconds.