Something strange happened tonight...

I got a little drunk tonight and suddenly decided to write a song. I've never written any songs before and to be honest, I know nothing about music. But, I came up with this and I'm not sure if these are good lyrics. Though it's not quite finished, what do you guys think?

I went around town on a lonely night
Just to end it with the girl that I didn’t really like
She had the heart of a devil but the look of an angel
I couldn’t understand why I never ran away
It’s okay. Hey hey.
Well, at least you went ahead and got right into the game.
It’s okay. Hey hey.
Well, you never had a chance to really go to the dance.
It’s okay. Hey, hey.
Well, you’ll never have to worry bout that woman again.
Oh, no. I know
She’s the girl that I haven’t really gotten to know.

And every single night when I’m alone at night.
I keep thinkin bout the woman that I really didn’t like.
She’s got the mind of a child with a smile that’s guile.
I can’t believe she made me go and kill for her plan.
It’s okay. Hey hey.
Well, at least you went ahead and got right into the game.
It’s okay. Hey hey.
Well, you never had a chance to really go to the dance.
It’s okay. Hey, hey.
Well, you’ll never have to worry bout that woman again.
Oh, no. I know
She’s the girl that I haven’t really gotten to know.

I went to her home to feel at home again
But then I got into her plan and then it started again.
I murdered three good men and robbed a fairer man.
I don’t know if I’ll ever see the fate that I’m in.
It’s okay. Hey hey.
Well, at least you went ahead and got right into the game.
It’s okay. Hey hey.
Well, you never had a chance to really go to the dance.
It’s okay. Hey, hey.
Well, you’ll never have to worry bout that woman again.
Oh, no. I know
She’s the girl that I haven’t really gotten to know.

I'll need to hear it with music.

Doesn't seem bad, but it's hard to just cold read things like "hey, hey" when that's a part clearly intended to be sung

Lol thanks. Yeah, looking back at this, it's kinda dumb. Still fun to write it, though. Thanks a bunch for the feedback.

I've written a few songs.. like a decade ago. lets see if I can remember one off the top of my head

all I have are days of past offenses
remember one last time
epitaph scrawled of senses
tombstone of sublime

sketchily etched brains gone quiet
sleeping at the wheel


hmm yeah that's all i can remember