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Opinion on a tagline, Room Traffic

dlevanchuk

dlevanchuk

Room Traffic, 10 min

Fantasy/Comedy

Tagline:

Financially struggling tenant tries to hide a disasterous inter-dimensional traffic detour corridor that unexpectadly appeared in his living room moments before a strict building management coductsa unit damage inspection to evaluate his deposit refund.

Sounds interesting? :)
 
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Do you mean "inter-dimensional?"

Sounds interesting in two respects, one for the reason you're asking, and the other that it seems like a lot to cover in 10 minutes, so interested to see how you write (or wrote) it up!
 
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cool! thanks!

havent wrote it. just formulated the tag line, will get structure down after i ll get off work .


i ll try to keep it under 10 mins. going for really high paced and bizarre :)
 
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