I'm going to make a short film for a film festival, but I'm having some problems, and I'm not sure how to address them.
I want this film to have one central theme: that all problems in life are trivial, and especially, TEMPORARY. That most problems in life won't last forever and you shouldn't get worked up about them.
I hoped to set up a likable character who has problems with his own failing in life, but this is hard.
I think I partially set up the fact that he is likable. But I want this to be a character study as well (the time limit for the festival is 7 minutes, and this script is around 4-5 pages/minutes long).
So my current problem is incorporating this second main idea into the film, that he's a normal, average dude who can't let himself fail in life, and when he does, he goes crazy. Which is why I made the film about Hot Pockets, which is an incredibly trivial thing to get worked up about.
This is also why I set up his phone conversation with his girlfriend. I was hoping she would be able to address to him the theme, but any attempts at her just flat out saying the theme would feel weird.
Also, the film will end with one of the two quotes I wrote fade on screen. Which one is better, and fits in more with the script? I think it's the first one, but I like the second one too.
So yeah, sorry for this long intro, but if anybody can help me out, that'd be great. Thanks!
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I want this film to have one central theme: that all problems in life are trivial, and especially, TEMPORARY. That most problems in life won't last forever and you shouldn't get worked up about them.
I hoped to set up a likable character who has problems with his own failing in life, but this is hard.
I think I partially set up the fact that he is likable. But I want this to be a character study as well (the time limit for the festival is 7 minutes, and this script is around 4-5 pages/minutes long).
So my current problem is incorporating this second main idea into the film, that he's a normal, average dude who can't let himself fail in life, and when he does, he goes crazy. Which is why I made the film about Hot Pockets, which is an incredibly trivial thing to get worked up about.
This is also why I set up his phone conversation with his girlfriend. I was hoping she would be able to address to him the theme, but any attempts at her just flat out saying the theme would feel weird.
Also, the film will end with one of the two quotes I wrote fade on screen. Which one is better, and fits in more with the script? I think it's the first one, but I like the second one too.
So yeah, sorry for this long intro, but if anybody can help me out, that'd be great. Thanks!
http://textuploader.com/?p=6&id=cLLF