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Read my screenplay (24 pages)

The link at the bottom of this post is a PDF of my first ever full screenplay. It is a currently untitled short film about a man whose daughter is murdered, and that man's descent into a dark, violent, almost evil existence. Though this is a revenge film, I wanted to make the main theme of the movie about how this man becomes so increasingly violent and brutal that he is almost like a villain. Anyways, if you read it, please give me some feedback. I would love plenty of constructive criticism, but I don't want to make it any longer than it already is. Also, if anyone has any ideas for a title, I would love to hear them. Thanks.

file:///C:/Users/abhis/Desktop/UNTITLED%20SCRIPT.pdf
 
Format is important. And easy to learn. When asking your fellow writers
to read a screenplay it's important to present it in proper format.

I think you will get better response if you start with proper format.
Start by using the standard font. I suggest getting rid of all the "CUT TO",
it really isn't needed. Every one reading a script will understand that
each new slug line means there will be a cut to the scene.

Congrats on finishing your first ever full screenplay. Now it's time to
learn proper format.
 
Saying Cut To and Close up is for the director when you're finally shooting the film. Save that for him. If you want to make side notes on your shot list as to where the cuts and close-ups are you can but not in the screenplay.
 
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