Ciaran de Bergerac (Short script)

Kind of predictable but cute nonetheless. It would make a fun short. I might make it a bit more twisted. Have Josie check her cell phone. When approached at the end have her smile and leave. Have her 'helper' swoop. When the two helpers drop their tablets, they realize they've been working at opposite ends. How it plays out would then be up to you. I like it as it is but think just a bit more would make it stand out. Just as the audience pieces together what they "know" is happening, another figure (the girl's Cyrano) makes an appearance. Would make a fun short. Good luck.

Many thanks for the feedback, like the idea of second Cyrano figure and you're right it will add to the drama. Really appreciated!