"Mortals" First ten pages

How long is the whole script? Feature length? Short?

The parts that bothered me were the plethora of spelling and grammatical errors as well as the descriptions of the characters. I had no sense of their age or look but I feel like this is a spin off of Kick Ass or something. It isn't terrible though and I'm wondering why Nightwatcher is startled when he punches the guy in the throat and why the workers cower in fear after cheering for him? Unless that skin substance at the end had something to do with it?

Mortals

you got it and thats what I wanted you to think. It is something like it but with a big twist like Kickass you will be surprised after reading it and you are correct about the spelling errors and descriptions I need to put more into it, I will do that. thanks