E. I get to post it on this forum and ask you good people for your opinion, so please leave me some feedback.
For an on-the-day, ad-libbed, simple sketch I didn’t find it
funny. I can see how you and your friends enjoy this and
that’s a fine start, but for those of us outside of your circle
of friends it just doesn’t work. It looks like you all are having
fun, but I wasn’t. For example, to you the reflection is funny
- to me it looks like you allowed a mistake in your movie
and didn’t bother to correct it.
You may love doing improve but it all felt forced to me. If
you hadn’t put (Comedy Sketch) I would not even know
your intent was to be funny.
Cool they you like it. As you progress you may consider making
a sketch comedy that people who don’t know you and your
friends will find funny. But this is a great start.