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watch The Fortress - Finnish action drama short

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SirRandom

Hello there! Here's our newest short film, which has been in production since last September. Its set in in post-apocalyptic Finland and finnish is the spoken language heard in the film BUT we have included english subtitles in the Captions section. Go check it out!

The miniature effects, professional workflow and shooting live action for a change were exciting things for me during this production. I did the post-production, writing and producing. So, go grab some popcorn and soda, sit back and let the film roll.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aUmbdbJxPgY

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aUmbdbJxPgY

Enjoy! Any comments, critique and feedback is welcome! ;)
 
SirRandom said:
Hello there! Here's our newest short film, which has been in production since last September. Its set in in post-apocalyptic Finland and finnish is the spoken language heard in the film BUT we have included english subtitles in the Captions section. Go check it out!

The miniature effects, professional workflow and shooting live action for a change were exciting things for me during this production. I did the post-production, writing and producing. So, go grab some popcorn and soda, sit back and let the film roll.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aUmbdbJxPgY

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aUmbdbJxPgY

Enjoy! Any comments, critique and feedback is welcome! ;)
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It looked OK although there was a lack of story. Judging by professional standards, it was not quite up to standard. By amateur levels it was respectable - decent.
 
I really wonder how professional is "gorillaonabike", critics without arguments are unuseful.
I enjoyed it! I think that you can work a little bit more on the music and the colors but is very good. I liked it! Keep it up!
 
Nicely done! Great costumes and the make done on that guys leg was really neat.

Sets were nice as well.

My only comment is I felt like the guy that was getting his leg stitched up wasn't believable. For some reason I felt like he should have been screaming in pain.
 
Thank you for your feedback!

The story could be better, agreed. Next time we will most likely improve on the drama and try to achieve a more professional look for the whole film. :)
 
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