Home Your Ad Here

Go Back   IndieTalk - Indie Film Forum > Making The Film > Screenwriting

Reply
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 06-19-2017, 02:04 AM   #16
buscando
Basic Member
 
Join Date: Jun 2017
Location: L.A.
Posts: 386
Quote:
Originally Posted by nobody View Post
I hope more people watch it online..... I mean it is not wanting the same response from the same people. I agree about the language....
OK well if you really want to write a script in English you need some more reading & writing classes in English. Because you're not fully understanding what people are telling you on this forum.
buscando is online now   Reply With Quote
Old Today   #1A
film guy
Basic Member
 
Posts: 17

 
Old 06-19-2017, 10:05 AM   #17
directorik
IndieTalk's Resident Guru
 
directorik's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: hollywood
Posts: 9,181
Quote:
Originally Posted by nobody View Post
I hope more people watch it online..... I mean it is not wanting the same response from the same people.
Yes, it is almost only me who responds to you. I will stop.
directorik is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 06-19-2017, 10:14 AM   #18
WalterB
Basic Member
 
Join Date: Feb 2010
Location: Rotterdam Area, The Netherlands
Posts: 3,321
Rik has been giving you the best advice from the start, leading you step by step to improve.

And then you complain that nobody wants to sponsor you while you showed the script to nobody?
And then you tell the people who do try to help to shut up?

Good luck!
WalterB is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 06-19-2017, 11:50 AM   #19
nobody
*
 
Join Date: Oct 2015
Location: Iran
Posts: 214
Quote:
Originally Posted by directorik View Post
Your format is getting better! You have a long way to go. Keep at it.


This is another “round-and-round”. You keep posting parts of a script
or just a story and hope that a producer or director will pay you to
write the rest. We tell you that no one will sponsor you to write the
script and you say it is frustrating to you because you really want
someone to pay you to write it. This happens over and over.

In another few weeks you will return with part of another script or a
story and ask the same question. The answer will not change.

You need to learn proper format and write the entire script. All of it.
Your english writing skills need a lot of work. I (and others) have
suggested you write in your native language but you have reasons
you don't want to do that. And now you say you have found no sponsor,
but that you haven't shown it to anyone. You cannot find a sponsor if
you do not show it to people who have the money to pay you. Another
circle; round-and-round.
I just wanted to clarify.. Not meant to hurt you.. I never meant it... Sorry in spite of that.


Thanks!
nobody is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 06-19-2017, 08:24 PM   #20
indietalk
IndieTalk Founder
 
indietalk's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: NYC
Posts: 9,864
Quote:
Originally Posted by WalterB View Post
And then you complain that nobody wants to sponsor you while you showed the script to nobody?
But he is nobody. You mean nobody? Or, nobody?



You could use an English writing partner. They can help co-write but also with dialog and phrasing, or only that, if you wish. Try the Networking forum and see if you can find a partner. http://www.indietalk.com/forumdisplay.php?f=49
indietalk is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 06-19-2017, 09:09 PM   #21
buscando
Basic Member
 
Join Date: Jun 2017
Location: L.A.
Posts: 386
Quote:
Try the Networking forum and see if you can find a partner.
Damn it, I clicked forward to the exact spot & scared myself.
I suppose this video could be symbolic of the writing process with a partner.
But if they're possessed of good skills it could be great.
buscando is online now   Reply With Quote
Old 06-22-2017, 10:14 AM   #22
directorik
IndieTalk's Resident Guru
 
directorik's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: hollywood
Posts: 9,181
Quote:
Originally Posted by nobody View Post
I just wanted to clarify.. Not meant to hurt you.. I never meant it... Sorry in spite of that.
I was not hurt. You don't want the same response (that you finish a script
using the screenplay format) from the same people (me), so I will respect
that and not respond anymore.
directorik is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 06-26-2017, 07:41 AM   #23
nobody
*
 
Join Date: Oct 2015
Location: Iran
Posts: 214
Quote:
Originally Posted by directorik View Post
I was not hurt. You don't want the same response (that you finish a script
using the screenplay format) from the same people (me), so I will respect
that and not respond anymore.
Great.......


Thanks!
nobody is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Bookmarks


Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 
Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -5. The time now is 09:25 PM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.9
Copyright ©2000 - 2017, vBulletin Solutions, Inc.


©IndieTalk