I have recently finished the first draft a short film that takes place in the near future when physician assisted suicide is legalized for depression. I am more a director and not a screen writer so I know it could use work
If you would like to proof read it for me and give some insights, I would love it. Now I know this thing is formatted improperly in many areas. Currently I am looking for feedback on the story arc and character development not really formatting yet. When I get closer to a final draft I will try and fix all of the formatting issues.
If you would like to give it a read, thanks!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BztBGUdPMaYfbC1FcWlPdktuNE0/view?usp=sharing
If you would like to proof read it for me and give some insights, I would love it. Now I know this thing is formatted improperly in many areas. Currently I am looking for feedback on the story arc and character development not really formatting yet. When I get closer to a final draft I will try and fix all of the formatting issues.
If you would like to give it a read, thanks!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BztBGUdPMaYfbC1FcWlPdktuNE0/view?usp=sharing