Ok, 3 months ago I finished the first draft of a screenplay of "The Forgotten Battle" and posted a thread here asking for feedback. You can probably find the thread by searching. And I got some very honest and healthy feedback.
Since then, I have revised multiple things in the screenplay, took out a lot of unnecessary characters, unnecessary scenes, tried to make it simple with a little amount of main(ish) characters, took a break for a while, and made the script lean and healthy as possible.
And I am here to ask for feedback because I still don't know if it is good or not. And please, I really need this feedback at this point.
Any feedback is warranted and appreciated.
Thank you for your time.
Final Draft: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B2gtHMO2K_7PVUdlWFlNaGgtSEU/view?usp=sharing
Since then, I have revised multiple things in the screenplay, took out a lot of unnecessary characters, unnecessary scenes, tried to make it simple with a little amount of main(ish) characters, took a break for a while, and made the script lean and healthy as possible.
And I am here to ask for feedback because I still don't know if it is good or not. And please, I really need this feedback at this point.
Any feedback is warranted and appreciated.
Thank you for your time.
Final Draft: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B2gtHMO2K_7PVUdlWFlNaGgtSEU/view?usp=sharing
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