I am currently struggling with the story, I was wondering if anyone could read and critique.
I'm mostly interested in feedback about the main character, the Villain and the grammar. However I am open to other points.
Link below:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/13xZDzQuFeDBbX-vy4HXFuauxwOy_1UiPtIKg18Lcby8/edit
I'm mostly interested in feedback about the main character, the Villain and the grammar. However I am open to other points.
Link below:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/13xZDzQuFeDBbX-vy4HXFuauxwOy_1UiPtIKg18Lcby8/edit