I will respectfully disagree with Will Vincent on this one--I thought the audio really worked. Right from the start, it set the mood for what was to come. Visually, it shows an amazing style. Conceptually, ...what can I say? I agree with those who say that your story didn't come through in the viewing, but I applaud you for that. It is refreshing to see a work that doesn't lead you by the hand. Clearly, it will not satisfy everyone's taste...but as long as you have satisfied your own, then you are an artist with integrity. Good job.