Hello,
I would appreciate it if you could give me some feedback on the first pages of my screenplay.
LOGLINE: 2 unlucky gangsters win the lottery, but their ticket is stolen by an unknowing stranger. Willing to do anything to get their money back, they trace him to a lonely motel. Getting their money back proves to be much more complicated (and deadly) when the other inhabitants cross their path.
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B4A_rnik1DsmTGxqWW5DY3FQczA
Thanks in advance.
I would appreciate it if you could give me some feedback on the first pages of my screenplay.
LOGLINE: 2 unlucky gangsters win the lottery, but their ticket is stolen by an unknowing stranger. Willing to do anything to get their money back, they trace him to a lonely motel. Getting their money back proves to be much more complicated (and deadly) when the other inhabitants cross their path.
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B4A_rnik1DsmTGxqWW5DY3FQczA
Thanks in advance.