An interesting claymation/cgi cartoon we created for a bands music video.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0QLBHuFpHqY
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0QLBHuFpHqY
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PaulWrightyThen
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Hi Guys,
Song's quite fun, and the character designs are good.
I've watched a couple of videos of yours on the youtube and you seem to be improving but I would say this seems to be a step back. Did you not have much time on this project? How long did it take if you don't mind me asking?
A couple of things that would really improve it:
Colour grading your shots and matching the characters to the environments. Also adding a touch of grain would help blend them together and make it look less like still photographs.
There are some big pauses as well were nothing happens.
27 seconds in when he falls of the pier his feet aren't off the edge of the screen and everything just hangs there. A lot of the composition is very flat. 2:29 (police line scene) is the exception.
You've definitely got the basics in other videos you've done, but I think what you should do is practice things like walk cycles and other essentials.
Keep going though.
I know this is a bit of a harsh crit, but I'm trying to help.
Song's quite fun, and the character designs are good.
I've watched a couple of videos of yours on the youtube and you seem to be improving but I would say this seems to be a step back. Did you not have much time on this project? How long did it take if you don't mind me asking?
A couple of things that would really improve it:
Colour grading your shots and matching the characters to the environments. Also adding a touch of grain would help blend them together and make it look less like still photographs.
There are some big pauses as well were nothing happens.
27 seconds in when he falls of the pier his feet aren't off the edge of the screen and everything just hangs there. A lot of the composition is very flat. 2:29 (police line scene) is the exception.
You've definitely got the basics in other videos you've done, but I think what you should do is practice things like walk cycles and other essentials.
Keep going though.
I know this is a bit of a harsh crit, but I'm trying to help.