Hey greetings and respect fellow filmakers..
This is anim8er92 and i am willing to make a short animation for my thesis project
I REALLY REALLY NEED SOMEONE TO HELP me bring my 20min script to 5minutes and its so dog gone hard and seemingly impossible for me i already spent months on it but couldnt accomplish anything
i need ideas from you guys...
I am uploading the Plot of the story please have a look and give me ideas...
Logline:
Story of a poor village girl being forced into a wedding with the King and her persistent struggle against the King’s Oppression
SYNOPSIS:
Story of a young Thari maiden who is abducted by the King for forceful wedding however she abstains herself and rejects all the Royal Riches and offers of the King and remains loyal to her village folk and homeland (Malir) and remains consistent on her decision in spite of severe oppression from the King
PLOT
The film starts with a Lapse of 1 Year after Marui has been captured by the king. The first scene shows Marui being brought in front of the king and as usual the king presses on her to marry him to which she bitterly rejects.
Next she is taken to the Royal Bath where she is ordered to take a bath by the king which she gently refuses claiming that it would be immoral to take cold baths in the palace while her family was out there burning in the desert.
Later a friend of Marui who is the King’s maiden comes to Marui to inform her that her family is dying back there in her village and that there isn’t much hope for them for it has been a drought for almost over two years.
Marui is jolted at that news of her family dying and sobs silently sitting in her dungeon.
Next scene reveals that it was the kings conspiracy to break Marui’s spirit by forcing one of the person Marui trusts into betraying her and telling Marui the false news of her family dying. Later the king enters her dungeons and offers Marui to marry her if she wants her people to come within the confines and comforts of Umerkot city so their misery is spared from the drought. Marui is silent and next scene reveals her in a brides dress with jewelry all over her.
The next scene reveals a ceremonial scene in which Marui is brought and made to sit with Umar. The Priest asks Marui about her consent. Marui is about to say the word yes when the king is awaken by a sudden thunder like sound. This reveals that the ceremony scene was his hallucination and kind of a dream.
Soon we see Marui Entering the king’s hall and she comes and stands right in front of King Umer and there is dead silence.
There Marui gives a little lecture to Umer and tells her that in no way does the universe holds the power in persuading me to marry you. And about my dying people? She explains that she has complete faith in the creator and the almighty that he would look out for them for verily he is the King of the kings.
Soon there is a loud clang of thunder and its starts raining heavily. Soon Marui excitedly runs out of the kings courtroom and through the corridors and up to the ceiling while taking off her bridal dress and jewelry and runs up to the tower where she rains and happily dances. And she finally raises her hand in form of dua and thanks the Almighty for HIS innumerous blessings........
I need your thoughts on the story also please help me brng it to as short as 5minutes or even change the story thanks so much...
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This is anim8er92 and i am willing to make a short animation for my thesis project
I REALLY REALLY NEED SOMEONE TO HELP me bring my 20min script to 5minutes and its so dog gone hard and seemingly impossible for me i already spent months on it but couldnt accomplish anything
i need ideas from you guys...
I am uploading the Plot of the story please have a look and give me ideas...
Logline:
Story of a poor village girl being forced into a wedding with the King and her persistent struggle against the King’s Oppression
SYNOPSIS:
Story of a young Thari maiden who is abducted by the King for forceful wedding however she abstains herself and rejects all the Royal Riches and offers of the King and remains loyal to her village folk and homeland (Malir) and remains consistent on her decision in spite of severe oppression from the King
PLOT
The film starts with a Lapse of 1 Year after Marui has been captured by the king. The first scene shows Marui being brought in front of the king and as usual the king presses on her to marry him to which she bitterly rejects.
Next she is taken to the Royal Bath where she is ordered to take a bath by the king which she gently refuses claiming that it would be immoral to take cold baths in the palace while her family was out there burning in the desert.
Later a friend of Marui who is the King’s maiden comes to Marui to inform her that her family is dying back there in her village and that there isn’t much hope for them for it has been a drought for almost over two years.
Marui is jolted at that news of her family dying and sobs silently sitting in her dungeon.
Next scene reveals that it was the kings conspiracy to break Marui’s spirit by forcing one of the person Marui trusts into betraying her and telling Marui the false news of her family dying. Later the king enters her dungeons and offers Marui to marry her if she wants her people to come within the confines and comforts of Umerkot city so their misery is spared from the drought. Marui is silent and next scene reveals her in a brides dress with jewelry all over her.
The next scene reveals a ceremonial scene in which Marui is brought and made to sit with Umar. The Priest asks Marui about her consent. Marui is about to say the word yes when the king is awaken by a sudden thunder like sound. This reveals that the ceremony scene was his hallucination and kind of a dream.
Soon we see Marui Entering the king’s hall and she comes and stands right in front of King Umer and there is dead silence.
There Marui gives a little lecture to Umer and tells her that in no way does the universe holds the power in persuading me to marry you. And about my dying people? She explains that she has complete faith in the creator and the almighty that he would look out for them for verily he is the King of the kings.
Soon there is a loud clang of thunder and its starts raining heavily. Soon Marui excitedly runs out of the kings courtroom and through the corridors and up to the ceiling while taking off her bridal dress and jewelry and runs up to the tower where she rains and happily dances. And she finally raises her hand in form of dua and thanks the Almighty for HIS innumerous blessings........
I need your thoughts on the story also please help me brng it to as short as 5minutes or even change the story thanks so much...
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