watch RZR Island short film and action sequence.

Okay guys, I put on another "short film" that leads into an action/sports. Not much dialogue but isn't that the point...telling a good enough story that dialogue isn't needed as much? Any way this was fun to make and I came up with the idea that morning and we shot the whole thing that day. Enjoy!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HqN-Kz6_SxA&list=UUf2MoKBzfvSP6etPOvE_1QA

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=www.youtube.com/watch?v=HqN-Kz6_SxA&list=UUf2MoKBzfvSP6etPOvE_1QA

Any comments? Also, how do I properly embed this player? Just shows a white box...