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watch My Short Film - Looking for Feedback

I didn't enjoy it, lacked anything solid for me to watch.

but i did get what you were trying to do, it just wasn't done very well.
 
mmmm I guess you'll hardly get any feedback from something like this. I personally didn't like it, but beyond that, there's nothing that anyone could tell you to do better. There's nothing that could be fixed or improved. It is what it is.
 
It didn't do anything for me. It was just... uninteresting. It didn't entertain me or make me want to watch more. Sorry man :(

But hey, Welcome to IndieTalk! :)
 
screen it at some local experimental film society/meetup and I wouldn't be surprised if you win something or get some good response
 
Thank you for all of the feedback here guys!
Basically, a friend and I set up green screen and camera, and just recorded our evening together, trying stupid things on camera.
 
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