First impressions are everything (I guess).
Hello, those who are reading. I need a favor of you all. I need to know how good or bad my screenplay is. I really do think it's good but, I would like to have another's opinion.
To give context: It's called "The Forgotten Battle". It's about the Aleutian Islands Campaign during World War 2 and the stories that surround it.
I would be much obliged if any feedback is given. Thank you.
EDIT: Second "Full" draft if anyone wants to read: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B2gtHMO2K_7PM1RYVG44allvajg/view?usp=sharing
Blase Henry
Hello, those who are reading. I need a favor of you all. I need to know how good or bad my screenplay is. I really do think it's good but, I would like to have another's opinion.
To give context: It's called "The Forgotten Battle". It's about the Aleutian Islands Campaign during World War 2 and the stories that surround it.
I would be much obliged if any feedback is given. Thank you.
EDIT: Second "Full" draft if anyone wants to read: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B2gtHMO2K_7PM1RYVG44allvajg/view?usp=sharing
Blase Henry
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