Hey guys, I'm looking for feedback on my Logline. I have three alternate versions and I'm trying to figure out which one is the most promising. Any comment or note would be much appreciated.
"Two friends lock themselves in an underground bunker believing an apocalyptic attack to be imminent. When one of them begins to doubt the attack, a deadly stand off ensues forcing the surviving friend to leave the bunker and find out the truth."
"As the earth is about to be attacked by an unknown force, Adam locks himself up in an underground bunker with the only person who would believe him-- Cassandra, a third year medical student who spends the night playing along with Adam's delusions in an effort to help him overcome them."
"Two friends lock themselves in an underground bunker as an unknown force wreaks havoc on earth."
Thanks!
"Two friends lock themselves in an underground bunker believing an apocalyptic attack to be imminent. When one of them begins to doubt the attack, a deadly stand off ensues forcing the surviving friend to leave the bunker and find out the truth."
or
"As the earth is about to be attacked by an unknown force, Adam locks himself up in an underground bunker with the only person who would believe him-- Cassandra, a third year medical student who spends the night playing along with Adam's delusions in an effort to help him overcome them."
or
"Two friends lock themselves in an underground bunker as an unknown force wreaks havoc on earth."
Thanks!