watch First 2 Short Films

These are my first two short films since high school. Had to knock off the rust somehow.

"The Beginning of the End"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=igS1jJP8PnI

And the second, which is a prequel to my first.

"The Cure"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UDWtHP32mmk

I am currently working on my third short which will hopefully be better in all areas than my first two. My focus with each film is to not only do something I hadn't done yet, but also improve on techniques I've already attempted.

"The Beginning of the End" The coloring was too contrasted. but the biggest issue was the lack of story. Who was he? Villain? Hero? What satisfaction did I get from watching it?

"The Cure" This was better. Coloring could use some work. The story was better. Your audio needs to be louder, I had my volume jacked all the way up and still couldn't understand it.

I think you could combined your two films not one. I like the idea of your story, but I would say introduce your creature/monster earlier in the film. If the main character was supposedly initially injured by this creature why does he have a bullet hole in him, and not cuts or scratches?

- Wolf