Hey!
I'm pretty new with script writing.
I usually think up a story and wing it. Never really wrote up a script in my life. Is there anyway I can improve in this script's story and format? Below is a script I'm going to film.
Duct tape fixes everything!
by philingfilms
TIM: Oh man! My new Jeans just got torn! How will I ever go outside?
NARRATOR: Not to worry! Just duct tape it!
TIM LOOKS CONFUSED AT THE CAMERA WITH A TAPED UP STUFFED DUCK
TIM: TAPE A DUCK?
NARRATOR: What? NO! Thats not even a… nevermind! Ducktape a solution to all your problems!
TIM: Sweet now I can go outsi-
TIM STEPS on random boulder in his house and trips
TIM ROLLING IN PAIN IN THE BACKGROUND.
STANDS UP WAY TOO BRUISED FROM THAT ROCK.
TIM: Oh man! THAT ROCK JUST RUINED MY NEW SHOES!
NARRATOR: Just duct tape it!
TIM DUCT TAPES HIS WHOLE SHOE
TIM: Woah thanks duct tape!
NARRATOR: Duct tape fixes everything!
TIM: Will it fix my pencil?
NARRATOR: YES!
TIM: Will it fix my social anxiety?
NARRATOR: Well...uhhhhhh...
TIM: Will it fix my cat?
NARRATOR: Oh god… I’m sorry… no...duct tape won't fix-
TIM: Will it fix my neighbor’S attitude?
NEIGHBOR SQUIRMING IN CHAIR TIED UP.
NARRATOR: Oh god! Why would you do that!
TIM: Will it fix my knife?
NARRATOR: OH NO, NO , NO IT WON’T
TIM SHANKS GUY.
EVERYONE IS SCREAMING.
ext. black in.
Int. black out.
TIM IS DRAGGING A BLACK BAG WITH STAINED BLOOD WITH BLOODY HANDS.
TIM: Thanks Duct Tape I owe you one!
NARRATOR:Hello officer? I’d like to report a murder.
PRICE NARRATOR: For only 9.99 you can have two rolls of Duct tape. And more if you call now!
DOOR OPENS.
TIM: Does Duct Tape fix snitches?
NARRATOR: OH GOD HE IS IN HERE SEND HELP!I’M ON HAZEL STREET 20-
NARRATOR SCREAM. STABBING AND GRUNTING.
TIM: Thanks duct tape!
I'm pretty new with script writing.
I usually think up a story and wing it. Never really wrote up a script in my life. Is there anyway I can improve in this script's story and format? Below is a script I'm going to film.
Duct tape fixes everything!
by philingfilms
TIM: Oh man! My new Jeans just got torn! How will I ever go outside?
NARRATOR: Not to worry! Just duct tape it!
TIM LOOKS CONFUSED AT THE CAMERA WITH A TAPED UP STUFFED DUCK
TIM: TAPE A DUCK?
NARRATOR: What? NO! Thats not even a… nevermind! Ducktape a solution to all your problems!
TIM: Sweet now I can go outsi-
TIM STEPS on random boulder in his house and trips
TIM ROLLING IN PAIN IN THE BACKGROUND.
STANDS UP WAY TOO BRUISED FROM THAT ROCK.
TIM: Oh man! THAT ROCK JUST RUINED MY NEW SHOES!
NARRATOR: Just duct tape it!
TIM DUCT TAPES HIS WHOLE SHOE
TIM: Woah thanks duct tape!
NARRATOR: Duct tape fixes everything!
TIM: Will it fix my pencil?
NARRATOR: YES!
TIM: Will it fix my social anxiety?
NARRATOR: Well...uhhhhhh...
TIM: Will it fix my cat?
NARRATOR: Oh god… I’m sorry… no...duct tape won't fix-
TIM: Will it fix my neighbor’S attitude?
NEIGHBOR SQUIRMING IN CHAIR TIED UP.
NARRATOR: Oh god! Why would you do that!
TIM: Will it fix my knife?
NARRATOR: OH NO, NO , NO IT WON’T
TIM SHANKS GUY.
EVERYONE IS SCREAMING.
ext. black in.
Int. black out.
TIM IS DRAGGING A BLACK BAG WITH STAINED BLOOD WITH BLOODY HANDS.
TIM: Thanks Duct Tape I owe you one!
NARRATOR:Hello officer? I’d like to report a murder.
PRICE NARRATOR: For only 9.99 you can have two rolls of Duct tape. And more if you call now!
DOOR OPENS.
TIM: Does Duct Tape fix snitches?
NARRATOR: OH GOD HE IS IN HERE SEND HELP!I’M ON HAZEL STREET 20-
NARRATOR SCREAM. STABBING AND GRUNTING.
TIM: Thanks duct tape!
