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Old 04-01-2018, 06:23 PM   #1
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NINJA COP-80's style action short film (2:53)

This is a short film I made called NINJA COP. It is heavily influenced by 80's action cinema. I made it by myself and for no money.

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Pretty faithful, I liked it - except for the framing device of a guy finding the tape. Get rid of that and just keep the actual short as the tape.
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Thanks for the feedback and I completely agree with you, the framing device was a little unnecessary so I have re-edited and re-uploaded.
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Nice work. I'm a sucker for the 80's aesthetic.
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Old 04-06-2018, 10:17 PM   #5
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Cool! Are all those people you?
Do you know about the 30 min. short Kung Fury?
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HAHAHA I TOTALLY dug this man! Lots of 80's cheese . There were some production issues but I love how you didn't hide them.
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Old 04-07-2018, 07:11 PM   #7
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Thanks for the comments everyone.
buscando, yes I played all five roles in the short film, I'm making a short "Making of" that'll explain more about it that I'll hopefully have up soon. And yes, I have seen Kung Fury, it's such a great short film, Kung Fury's costume inspired the costume of the Ninja Cop in my short.
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Old 04-14-2018, 08:38 AM   #8
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This is a short film I made called NINJA COP. It is heavily influenced by 80's action cinema. I made it by myself and for no money.

Really great and the nostalgic feel is just right, however I do think just asking a friend if they would put on a costume and stand there might have helped the shots not feel so choppy, since you had to act out all the parts.
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