need some feedback on my short film! Rushed project.
- Thread starter Ragnarok
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Jolly good show.
You sure you rushed that? Dont be trying to get extra props. It was good. Carry demons since his childhood.
You sure you rushed that? Dont be trying to get extra props. It was good. Carry demons since his childhood.
Good job!
I liked it! Didn't seem rushed to me either.
I'm by far an expert in cinematography, but I think your short is shot very nicely. The ligthing gives the short a dark ambiance which I think works out very well and compliments the story a lot.
I must admit I'm not a huge fan of the voice over. I think that your short might have had a bigger (emotional) impact without it.
Again, this is just my personal opinion. All in all I think you made a great short and I will definitely check out your future short films.
Nice job!
I'm by far an expert in cinematography, but I think your short is shot very nicely. The ligthing gives the short a dark ambiance which I think works out very well and compliments the story a lot.
I must admit I'm not a huge fan of the voice over. I think that your short might have had a bigger (emotional) impact without it.
Again, this is just my personal opinion. All in all I think you made a great short and I will definitely check out your future short films.
Nice job!
I like it too. Didn't seem rushed at all. Well, except for the fact that the old man's flashbacks had clothes and hair that seemed too contemporary. Otherwise, excellent film.