Handycam short film: feedback required

Hi guys,

Just recently joined this forum. I'm from India and m an amateur filmmaker with a handycam and a laptop for my production equipment basically.

Have recently completed a 3 minute short film called "Ranjans Workout" which is an ironical take on the concept of a "workout" as viewed from the perspectives of two individuals belonging to different strata in society.

Would really appreciate it if you guys cud watch this attempt n give your feedback.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YpOSMq5cqsA

Thanks,
Debashish
 
Short Film

Good camera work. Nice res. at first I was lost but found a way through it. Great music. To funny about what the mom says at the end about the boy needing to go with! Liked that!:yes: The voices did seem to echo and the tapping of the spoon sent spikes into my head. An at times you can really tell where you edited it.

It is a very nice film. How many have you done thus far?


Zonmae
 
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