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watch Thoughts on my 2 short films please

I made the first one a few months ago because I actually wanted to make something with my new camcorder, and I made the second one a week or so ago. They are both pretty awful and cringeworthy, but everyone has to start somewhere, right?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vV8ZbIU6gns

I feel I improved a tad on the second one-
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=su4q3sLMYAs

Right now I tried to do stuff by myself. (i.e. me holding the camera in front of myself while filming). Any feedback would be awesome. Just throw that criticism and shit on me.
 
You should find some more people to work with to help you. It is pretty obvious is some of the shots that you are holding your own camera.
 
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